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I can't describe the feelings
I can't repeat it one more time
I can't agree with the stories
It can't be just inside my mind
These lies my lips keep forming
The truth is warped inside
These pictures I keep seeing
Are just a frame of mind

Ich bin alleine
Ich bin alleine

One day my eyes are weeping
One day my wrists are bleeding
These hallucinations I keep tasting
Are controlling all of time
I start to speak and I begin to stutter
I've lost an hour, lost a day
I convince myself that this is normal
At least that's when I have the time

Ich bin alleine
Ich bin alleine

I've warped my mind slowly
With dreams and thoughts of you
I waited outside your house
I took polaroids of your every move
I sat in the rain in my mother's Astra
I pondered upon my future actions
You've stolen all my sanity
I'm crossing with with only a pawn's move

Ich bin alleine
Ich bin alleine

Ich habe zurucktret und du hast eine Schock bekommt
Mich schockierst nichst mehr- ich bin eine Morderin
Ich habe ein nich egoisitich Messer- er liebt du und ich
Dein Blut ist rot und es befleckt mich
Wie tief ist die Schnittwunde in dein weiss Hals?
Ich liebe du uber alles und du hast ein Kruzific verdient
Der Streit entwickelte sich zu einer grosse Schlagerei
Wenn ich mich in Spiegel ansehre, ich sehe dein Blut

Ich bin alleine
Ich bin so alleine

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(Rough translation of last verse:
I stepped back and you had a shock coming
Nothing shocks me anymore- I am a murderer
I have an unselfish knife- it loves you and me
Your blood is red and it stains me
How deep is the cut in your white neck?
I'm devoted to you and you deserve a cucifix
The argument developed into a massive fight
When I look at myself in the mirror, I see your blood)
©2004-2010 ~0042
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Full title: The Barriers Are There For a Reason

The last verse took me about 2 hours to write. Please correct the german if it is wrong!

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:iconshapeofagirl:
this is amazing !!! so fucking amazing ...this will be the first peice of poetry I' ve ever favorite ed .... I love this !!! you are such a talented writer Im oh so jealous ...

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"your suffering will free you."
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Thank you....:blowkiss: :blush: :hug:
That's one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me. :-)
Thank you so much again! :smooch: lol
:iconshapeofagirl:
you're so welcome ! :)

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"your suffering will free you."
:iconintendedself:
Yes, BARRIERS. i THINK we ARE THE barriers. oUR PROJECTED WORRIES OF A LIKELY SITUATION IS A BARRIER. oUR PAST IS A BARRIER.
:iconsprale:
I do not think the German is flawed, but i did not know a few of the words, it has been a while since i spoke it xD

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Never ponder the mountain's summit before reaching its foot.
:icon0042:
Admittedly, the German-English dictionary helped me quite a bit! I'm trying to practise writing and speaking both French and German more as I have mock GCSEs in them soon....although I don't expect I'll have to say about killing anyone.....
:iconsprale:
Wow, i can only speak English and German, but three languages must be harder than hell to learn xD

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Never ponder the mountain's summit before reaching its foot.
:iconsprale:
Well that is good that the languages interest you, it will be good for the future.

Someday i plan on learning Japanese, but i dunno xD

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Never ponder the mountain's summit before reaching its foot.
:icon0042:
Not really, it is definaqtley confusing sometimes though.... I kinda think now in a weird polygot of all three languages!
It sounds kinda sad, but i really like learning different languages, as well as French and German, I know a little Dutch and Italian and I've also done Latin.....
:iconaplaycalledlife:
Really good. It seems as though it's a song. Props to you.
Sarah

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But love is blind, and lovers cannot

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